tocryabout: Martin Tielli, cover of Poppy Salesman album (Joel Plaskett)
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Chapter 15, "Toute en Splendeur", is complete. Referendum! Annoyingly political relatives! Hockey!

Upon some consideration, I decided that since I'm doing a sequel I have nothing much to say in the epilogue. So we're done. 65,700 words. Endnotes are here.

As a DVD extra sort of thing, I also found a file on my computer which you may or may not find interesting: the McCree/O'Brien family tree, with unimportant siblings left off (I was trying to save space). Nana is Margaret Macdonald, a reference to my own great-aunt who died this year. Grey text = deceased.

Finally, new banner:

(That's Tony Dekker of Great Lake Swimmers, not Joel Plaskett.)

Hooray for me, anyhow. The first chapter of the sequel is quite close to complete, so you'll be seeing it quite soon. As soon as I think of a title. (I always regretted giving Aphanes its rather impenetrable Greek name; not really a grabber.)

*drinks wine*

Date: 2005-11-21 04:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ex-the-epic80.livejournal.com
I will never be able to read your novel in the same light again, Francois Andreane.

Date: 2005-11-21 04:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] talktooloose.livejournal.com
Looking forward to reading it tonight. Why have you not yet announced this in [livejournal.com profile] xmmff?

Date: 2005-11-25 01:28 am (UTC)
brownbetty: (Mina)
From: [personal profile] brownbetty
I set this aside to read later and only just got around to it now. Thanks for getting Joel to this place where I can like him. And thank you so much for giving me so much Ottawa scenery!

Date: 2005-11-29 07:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] youngest-one.livejournal.com
Excellent work, as usual. The family gathering reminded me of all the various holiday dinners I've attended over the years - the smell of food, the kids yelling and laughing at their own table, well meaning relatives saying things that make you want to smack them.

I wasn't sure about the ending at first, but after reading it again, I've decided that it was appropriate. Joel's story was about finding acceptance and understanding, and his refusal to give up and go to his room showed just how much he's grown in the course of this story. I was proud, impressed, and touched. I can't wait to see where you take him next.

You mentioned in the author's notes that this story was inspired by a dream. Did you go straight from the dream to writing the story, or was there a longer interval in between?

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