Chapter One, up and unbeta'd.

[tocryabout]

I'm moving as quickly as I can, because that seems to be the only way to keep from losing both my nerve and my interest while writing. So the first part of my X-Men novella/serial/thingy is up. It's about 3,600 words, and I'm sure there are dumb little spots where I use the same word too often or write some crap-ass sentence. Anyone who wants to volunteer to beta-read will be loved forever.

Voilà: The Aphanes (main page), or go straight to Chapter 1.

Feedback is hot. Comment here or email me at surlybird @gmail.com.

Comments

[to-cry-about.livejournal.com]

Oh wow, thank you! :D I've been reading your stuff for years and I love it, so your comment makes my day.

I've read my share of bad OC fic too, but the good ones can be so good that I willingly wade through the dreck, which is often unintentionally hilarious.