The Aphanes, Ch. 2
Dec. 14th, 2004 03:24 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
tocryaboutChapter 2 is now up. Thanks to the badass ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
fourlittlesongs for beta-reading.
The Aphanes (contents page), or go straight to Chapter 2, Underneath the Ice.
Heads up for profanity, in case you didn't already know that.
Edit: I'm about finished with Ch. 3, so it will probably be up in a few days. Then I'm leaving town (and my computer) for Christmas break, to return in early January. I usually get some writing done longhand while I'm at home, but I always miss my lovely computer with its dear old ergonomic keyboard.
By the way, if you write a lot and you're thinking of buying one of these fancy-dan keyboards, they are well worth the money (I think mine was about $80). I used to have to stop every few hours to try to get the circulation back into my hands, but now I can type top speed all night. The only disadvantage is that now, when I do have to use ordinary keyboards, I make a lot of mistakes and I cry and I miss my proper keyboard.
As for writing longhand, the less said the better.
fourlittlesongs for beta-reading.The Aphanes (contents page), or go straight to Chapter 2, Underneath the Ice.
Heads up for profanity, in case you didn't already know that.
Edit: I'm about finished with Ch. 3, so it will probably be up in a few days. Then I'm leaving town (and my computer) for Christmas break, to return in early January. I usually get some writing done longhand while I'm at home, but I always miss my lovely computer with its dear old ergonomic keyboard.
By the way, if you write a lot and you're thinking of buying one of these fancy-dan keyboards, they are well worth the money (I think mine was about $80). I used to have to stop every few hours to try to get the circulation back into my hands, but now I can type top speed all night. The only disadvantage is that now, when I do have to use ordinary keyboards, I make a lot of mistakes and I cry and I miss my proper keyboard.
As for writing longhand, the less said the better.
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Date: 2004-12-14 04:41 pm (UTC)And mmm, a plot. This is plausible and intriguing, and the characters' frustration really comes through.
The professor reaching out toward his mind, like an optometrist's flashlight in the darkness.
Nice.
Just curious -- is your Hank blue?
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