Hmm. I would have liked to learn more about Father Giles, and how he met Charles and started quarrling with him,, how he founded St. Rita's, stuff like that.
There's something about your description of your character's thought and longings that reminds me of O'Connor. "Parker's Back", for instance.
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Date: 2006-01-19 10:09 pm (UTC)Hmm. I would have liked to learn more about Father Giles, and how he met Charles and started quarrling with him,, how he founded St. Rita's, stuff like that.
There's something about your description of your character's thought and longings that reminds me of O'Connor. "Parker's Back", for instance.