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Coming by the end of the week, inshallah, is a New X-Men: Academy X short (actually a New Mutants vol 2 short, but this book has so many names it's easy to quibble). It won't require much background knowledge of the comics, so a number of you might enjoy it.

I bought #21 of New X-Men last night, so just allow me to stroke my neckbeard a little.

- I guess it's too much to ask for Wolverine's clone to look like him, isn't it? Anyone who replies that some cloned animals don't resemble the "originals" wins the nerd prize for the day, but I still think it's pretty Sueish to make X-23 beautiful as well as lethal and tortured. Wouldn't an ugly, hairy chick with claws be more interesting? Or at least more believable? Fuck the conventions of comics, if Wolverine were a girl he'd be an ugly bitch of a girl, not a waifish wunderkind with enormous soulful grey eyes.

- I like David's Danger Cave, although it seems sort of...I dunno, pointless? Irrelevant? Some adjective like that. Brian as Storm was priceless.

- Ooh, Jay drama. Whatever. [This has always bothered me about Jay: he has wings, but when he wanted to kill himself he went with a knife in the chest? The hell?]

- Julian being an ass is always awesome. I would read a book solely centred on Julian, in which all he does is fly around and say insensitive things to people. Santo is a great sidekick in this regard.

- Noriko being an ass is less awesome. I'm not sure why that is -- maybe because she's so self-righteous about it. At least Julian knows he's a dick. And he takes so much joy in it. P.S. to Brian Reber: Nori dyes her hair. Her eyebrows should not be blue. You can go blind if you try to dye your eyebrows.

- "The path to Eden is paved with swords and serpents, only the chosen will survive the journey..." Is Stryker a Calvinist, or some sort of believer in the predestination of an Elect? I'm probably giving Kyle/Yost too much credit. But that would be an interesting religious angle on the Decimation: as a signal grace or sign of predestination. I don't know if the Protestant and evangelical traditions include beliefs like this (they might think it was superstitious), but 19th-century Catholicism did embrace this sort of thinking in popular devotions.

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I've been resisting this meme for a couple of days, but I'm succumbing. Via [livejournal.com profile] reunion and [livejournal.com profile] minisinoo:

01. Do I have a distinct style of writing?
02. If so, what exactly is it that defines my style?
03. Would you say my stories follow a certain theme?
04. Is there anything you feel I ought to improve or change?
05. Does my style (if I have one) remind you of anyone else?
06. Judging from whatever writing of mine that you've seen, what do you think is/are my strength(s)?
07. What do you think are my weaknesses?

(If you want to treat 4 and 7 as the same question, go for it.)
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Date: 2006-01-13 03:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] to-cry-about.livejournal.com
Pacing is something I struggle with a lot, especially in short pieces. I always feel like I have too much dialogue and action, but I'm glad that people are telling me the opposite (since I like writing that stuff).

I don't read that much lit mainstream, so it's odd that I sound that way. Our writing course in high school strongly encouraged it, though.

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