The Aphanes, Ch. 6 - "The October Crisis"

[tocryabout]

Chapter 6 is completed and up. Terrorism! Telepathy! Thoreau! This has it all.

Read it from the beginning here or go straight to ch. 6, "The October Crisis".



I am enjoying this fic, even though in many ways it doesn't resemble most fanfic, so I hope other people are at least reading it. Feedback of all varieties is craved -- particularly criticism.

Comments

[ion-bond.livejournal.com]

Hey there.

I just wanted to drop you a line to let you know that I am reading "The Aphanes" and really enjoying it. I just caught up on chapters 3-6.

I've having trouble with delivering timely and articulate feedback recently. (I'll try harder with the next chapter.) But I bet there are a lot of people out there, lurking and reading and feeling too intimidated to comment.

It's just such a beautiful, realistic and I-don't-know, far-reaching fic.

I'm looking forward to reading the next part.

[to-cry-about.livejournal.com]

*blush* Thank you! I'm really glad it's working for you.

But I bet there are a lot of people out there, lurking and reading and feeling too intimidated to comment.

Heh. Honestly, it probably has a pretty tiny audience, because I hate going around and pimping it, but I like imagining that there are lurkers who are too overawed to comment. ;-P